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Post by jacksoule on Apr 27, 2009 13:15:12 GMT -5
`` The Basics Name: Thomas Kennedy
Age: 19
Gender: Male
`` About You
Race: Werewolf
Class: Elemental
Appearance (No Pictures): Thomas stands at 6'2", weighing 173 lbs. He has a slightly muscular and athletic build. Dark brown hair flows down to his shoulders. His eyes are gray-blue, and shimmer beautifully in the light. For a werewolf, his skin is oddly pale; looking more like a Human's.
Celebrity Claim: CELEBRITY HERE
`` Everything Else
Family: Father: Devon Kennedy, 41, Alive Mother: Sabrina Kennedy, 39, Alive Sister: Lucia Kennedy, 12, Deceased
Character History: Thomas was born to a proud family living around Mani Lake. They were rather prominent in the village, his mother being an agricultural leader an his father being a talented warrior. Though privileged, Thomas was taught harshly how to fight and control his power as an elemental. Mental, as well as physical strength were highly important in his family.
At 15, his father brought him on a small military campaign. It was meant to be an experience scaring him from the military. Rather, it influenced him to train harder and become stronger than even his father. This shift began to isolate him from his family. Slowly he become colder and more independent, believing that one's own personal strength is of utmost importance.
Near Summer's Eve two years ago, Thomas and his sister ventured far from the village. Lucia climbed a tree and asked Thomas to join her. Instead he decided he wanted to go further. He commanded she stayed there so as not to get lost. Awhile later, her voice rang throughout forest. It was a cry for help, and at first Thomas ignored her. She had probably just fallen. If not able to help herself, Thomas couldn't help her either. After she screamed "Elves" his entire mindset changed. By the time he arrived, Lucia was bloodied on the ground. The arrow stuck in her abdomen was clearly Dark Elf work. To this day Thomas is wrought with pain over the death of his sister, which he believes he could have prevented.
Other (Pets, Home...): Thomas moved away from Mani Lake, and now lives in the Smar Mountains. After spending almost two years in the mountains he has befriended a wild cat that protects his home.
Role-Play Sample: Thomas sat in the soft grass, letting his thoughts take flight with the wind. It had been almost two years since his sister had been murdered, and his mind had begun running stray. Though the occasional nomad group would pass through, he never talked to anyone. Maybe it was time to leave and traverse the Isle.
With a sigh Thomas stood up. The view from here was beautiful. How the sun shimmered off the river, the snow-capped peaks, and emerging grass made the area seems like a portrait. It was lonely, however. Animals weren't the best for conversation.
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Post by Hyacinth Erasmus on Apr 29, 2009 6:47:08 GMT -5
All seems well, except for one thing. Your character history has to be at least three paragraphs, so when you fix it, just post here and we'll go over it again : )
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Post by jacksoule on Apr 29, 2009 12:32:56 GMT -5
Thank you, updated
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